I took a writing class with Mrs. Mackesy. She taught us how to write a good paragraph. I need to remember to use an outline, then add the dress ups and then edit. You can also add a graphic.
Here is mine on exercise......
Exercise is truly helpful to your body. Exercise can burn off fat. When you use a running bike, exercise can be exciting. Slowly, exercise helps you grow stronger. Exercise is important.
Here is mine on exercise......
Exercise is truly helpful to your body. Exercise can burn off fat. When you use a running bike, exercise can be exciting. Slowly, exercise helps you grow stronger. Exercise is important.
Isn't it fun to learn how to add all those details to a paragraph. You composed a well written paragraph. I liked your topic sentence.
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